There was a morning with no sunlight, full of fog. Everyone was walking and saw a transforming robot car coming out. They stopped taking pictures because it was so beautiful and looked like a hero. Robot standing in front of human. His hands and feet are big, and his body is really big. It turns on its eyes and looks at people as if it were itself.
Kia Ora John. My name is Titan as you know. I liked the way you made your story complex because it makes it a bit more interesting. When I read your post I learnt how to do complex sentences. Maybe next time, you could add more information just to make it a bit better. How hard was it for you to make this?.
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Kia Ora John, My name is Pavan and I am from room 24. I actually enjoyed reading your paragraphs mostly because it had great wow words and some great detail but most of all I really liked how you described it a lot. Great job on your writing and make sure to keep up the good work. But next time can you write a bit more.
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